the wind chases me down the road.lighting dancing across the sky.the water rushed across as I try to cross the lake.the car complained as the key was turned.when the punch came with force of an army.
there came a wave like a great hand grabbing everything on land.
there came a wave like a great hand grabbing everything on land.
Great picture choices.
ReplyDeleteSome good uses of personification Tevita. Remember that you still need to use punctuation on the computer. Each sentence should start with a capital letter.
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